We are writing about our experience at the Mahuika Show.
First the man characters are kahu,sissy and Nan.
Nan froze and potki appeared out of no were and potki said you have 1 day until Nan turns in to coal. Potki said you can save Nan if you go to my Mather and she will not turn in to coal saw sissy pilled a kite out of the magic kete it tolled them were to go saw sissy and kahu walked to the swamp they thread to run across the swamp but they got poached back and then a pectin came out of the swamp and sissy got the quiz but kahu had to stay be hind and sissy got to go to Mahuika to save Nan.
Next steps
- Re read each sentence - does it make sense?
- Full stops and capital letters
- Correct your spelling errors
